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Quizzes / Tests: Quiz on African
American literature history Final
essay exam
: The Watsons Go to Birmingham
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Rubric:
Rubric check
off for essay exam
1. Responded correctly
to the command word in the question
2. Wrote neatly using
blue or black pen
3. Left a margin on
both sides of the paper and a two line margin at the bottom.
4. Provided a new,
well-developed paragraph for each new idea
5. Re-stated the question in the topic sentence of the first
paragraph
6. Provided good topic
sentences
7. Provided important
support details to fully develop the answer
8. Provided good
concluding sentence for each paragraph—avoided “In conclusion”
9. Organized ideas well
10. Used complete sentences ; avoided fragments, run-ons and comma
splices
11. Used transition words within each paragraph
12. Used a semi-colon correctly in a compound sentence at least
once in the exam
13. Used comma correctly in a compound sentence joined by a simple
conjunction
14. Avoided irrelevant or useless information
15. Spelled words
correctly
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MULTIPLE
INTELLIGENCE NOVEL PROJECTS
VERBAL
/ LINGUISTIC
1.
Research the history of African Americans in Wisconsin.
Write a two page report or give
an oral presentation.
2.
Write an original story about a family.
The protagonist should be your age, and the
conflict should involve the adolescent.
3. Read
The Well or The Delany Sisters. Complete
a book report in either written,
visual, or oral form.
4. Write
a scene from The Watsons Go to
Birmingham—1963 in
drama form. Present
it live or in
video form.
5. Research
the NAACP. Write a two page
report on the information you collected.
6. Research
the importance of Birmingham, AL to the Civil Rights Movement.
Write a
two page report.
7. Create
a front page for the Birmingham News
in 1963 about the bombing of the
Sixteenth Street Baptist Church.
8. Write
four original poems with the theme of tolerance.
9. Re-write
the ending of the novel
10. Do a
dramatic reading of a scene from the story.
LOGICAL / MATH
1. Research
the racial/ethnic make-up of Waukesha today and in 1963. Create a graph
showing the population distribution and comparison.
2. Describe
four techniques used by crime labs to solve bombings. Explain the
supporting data behind these techniques.
3. Design
a “trip-tik” showing the
route from Flint, MI to Birmingham, AL.
Calculate
mileage, cost, and time.
Plan the route for a family trip.
4. Develop
a board game based on the main events in the story or
the history of the Civil
Rights Movement in America.
VISUAL /
SPACIAL
1. Create
a 3-D map of the Watson car route from Flint, MI to Birmingham, AL.
2. Illustrate
your interpretation of The Watsons Go to Birmingham-1963 in a ten-frame
story board.
3. Create
a sketch or 3-D model of “Wool Pooh.”
4. Create
a classroom poster for this novel.
5. Create
a collage with the theme of tolerance.
6.
Design a multicultural logo for the city of Waukesha.
MUSICAL
1.
Research the music of the 1960’s
and put together a collage of recordings.
2. Write
a song about tolerance. Perform
for the class or on tape.
3. Put
together a slide show about Central Middle School that reflects its
multicultural
make-up. Combine the
slides with songs that reflect Central’s goal of tolerance.
4. Combine
The Battle Hymn of the Republic
with Martin Luther King’s speech I
Have
a
Dream. Create a
complimentary poem/song using both.
5. Create
the theme song for the movie version of The
Watsons Go To Birmingham—
1963.
BODY /
KINESTHETIC
1. Build
a model of one of the scenes from the novel.
2. Weave
a dream catcher and incorporate all the dreams of Martin Luther King that
have become a reality.
3. Create
a 3-D model of a memorial for the Washington DC Mall that would be
dedicated to the Africans who were enslaved in this country.
4. Choreograph
a dance representing peace and tolerance.
Set it to appropriate
music. Present a
video.
5. Create
a sculpture symbolizing tolerance
INTERPERSONAL
In a cooperative learning group, use the
following problem solving model to come up with possible solutions for
intolerance today.
1. Identify the problem
2. Brainstorm
3. Prioritize solutions
4. Sell the ideas to others
5. Develop a plan of action
Write a reflection about your group’s work:
what did the group do well?
how could you improve team work?
apply this model to a community situation of intolerance
INTRAPERSONAL
1. What
would you do if you were either Byron or Kenny in any major scene in the
story.
How would you have reacted? Write
a two page response.
2. Create
a collage which illustrates your view of tolerance.
3. Have
you ever felt not accepted or different?
Write a poem or essay about that
feeling.
4. Looking
at the members of the Watson family, create a visual representation of the
personalities in that family.
5. Write
a letter to the four girls who were the victims of the Birmingham bombing.
Explain to them what we have done as a country to become more
tolerant of others.
*PROJECT
NOTES
1. If
you do any research, you must document your sources.
2. Any
oral presentations will receive ten extra credit points.
3. Mark
down the due date in your assignment notebook.
4. When
you turn in your project, identify it by area and number
5. PUT
YOUR NAME ON YOUR PROJECT
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Scoring
Guides for projects:
Making
A Map : Watsons Go to Birmingham
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CATEGORY
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Advanced
Proficient
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Proficient
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Basic
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Minimal
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Neatness
of Color and Lines
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All
straight lines are ruler-drawn, all errors have been neatly
corrected and all features are colored completely.
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All
straight lines are ruler-drawn, most errors have been neatly
corrected and most features are colored completely.
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Most
straight lines are ruler-drawn, most errors have been neatly
corrected and most features are colored completely.
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Many
lines, corrections of errors, and/or features are not neatly done.
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Spelling/Capitalization
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95-100%
of words on the map are spelled and capitalized correctly.
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94-85%
of the words on the map are spelled and capitalized correctly.
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84-75%
of the words on the map are spelled and capitalized correctly.
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Less
than 75% of the words on the map are spelled and/or capitalized
correctly.
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Knowledge
Gained
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When
shown a blank base map, the student can rapidly and accurately label
at least 10 features including the Mason-Dixon Line
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When
shown a blank base map, the student can rapidly and accurately label
8-9 features including the Mason-Dixon Line
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When
shown a blank base map, the student can rapidly and accurately label
6-7 features including the Mason-Dixon Line
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When
shown a blank base map, the student can rapidly and accurately label
fewer than 6 features.
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Color
Choices
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Student
always uses color appropriate for features (e.g. blue for water;
black for labels, etc.) on map.
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Student
usually uses color appropriate for features (e.g. blue for water;
black for labels, etc.).
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Student
sometimes uses color appropriate for features (e.g. blue for water;
black for labels, etc.).
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Student
does not use color appropriately.
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Labels
- Accuracy
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At
least 90% of the items are labeled and located correctly.
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80-89%
of the items are labeled and located correctly.
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79-70%
of the items are labeled and located correctly.
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Less
than 70% of the items are labeled and located correctly.
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Scale
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All
features on map are drawn to scale and the scale used is clearly
indicated on the map.
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Most
features on map are drawn to scale and the scale used is clearly
indicated on the map.
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Many
features of the map are NOT drawn to scale even though a scale is
clearly indicated on the map.
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Many
features of the map are NOT drawn to scale AND/OR there is no scale
marker on the map.
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Labels
& Features - Neatness
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90-100%
of the labels/features can be read easily.
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89-80%
of the labels/features can be read easily.
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79-70%
of the labels/features can be read easily.
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Less
than 70% of the labels/features can be read easily.
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Map
Legend/Key
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Legend
is easy-to-find and contains a complete set of symbols, including a
compass rose.
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Legend
contains a complete set of symbols, including a compass rose.
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Legend
contains an almost complete set of symbols, including a compass
rose.
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Legend
is absent or lacks several symbols.
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Title
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Title
tells the purpose/content of the map, is clearly distinguishable as
the title (e.g. larger letters, underlined, etc), and is printed at
the top of the map.
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Title
tells the purpose/content of the map and is printed at the top of
the map.
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Title
tells the purpose/content of the map, but is not located at the top
of the map.
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Purpose/content
of the map is not clear from the title.
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Making
A Poster
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CATEGORY
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Advanced
Proficient
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Proficient
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Basic
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Minimal
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Graphics
- Originality
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Several
of the graphics used on the poster reflect an exceptional degree of
student creativity in their creation and/or display.
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One
or two of the graphics used on the poster reflect student creativity
in their creation and/or display.
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The
graphics are made by the student, but are based on the designs or
ideas of others.
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No
graphics made by the student are included.
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Graphics
- Relevance
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All
graphics are related to the topic and make it easier to understand.
All borrowed graphics have a source citation.
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All
graphics are related to the topic and most make it easier to
understand. All borrowed graphics have a source citation.
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All
graphics relate to the topic. Most borrowed graphics have a source
citation.
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Graphics
do not relate to the topic OR several borrowed graphics do not have
a source citation.
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Labels
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All
items of importance on the poster are clearly labeled with labels
that can be read from at least 3 ft. away.
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Almost
all items of importance on the poster are clearly labeled with
labels that can be read from at least 3 ft. away.
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Several
items of importance on the poster are clearly labeled with labels
that can be read from at least 3 ft. away.
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Labels
are too small to view OR no important items were labeled.
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Required
Elements
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The
poster includes all required elements as well as additional
information.
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All
required elements are included on the poster.
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All
but 1 of the required elements are included on the poster.
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Several
required elements were missing.
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Knowledge
Gained
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Student
can accurately answer all questions related to facts in the poster
and processes used to create the poster.
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Student
can accurately answer most questions related to facts in the poster
and processes used to create the poster.
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Student
can accurately answer about 75% of questions related to facts in the
poster and processes used to create the poster.
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Student
appears to have insufficient knowledge about the facts or processes
used in the poster.
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Content
- Accuracy
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At
least 7 accurate facts are displayed on the poster.
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5-6
accurate facts are displayed on the poster.
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3-4
accurate facts are displayed on the poster.
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Less
than 3 accurate facts are displayed on the poster.
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Attractiveness
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The
poster is exceptionally attractive in terms of design, layout, and
neatness.
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The
poster is attractive in terms of design, layout and neatness.
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The
poster is acceptably attractive though it may be a bit messy.
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The
poster is distractingly messy or very poorly designed. It is not
attractive.
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Title
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Title
can be read from 6 ft. away and is quite creative.
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Title
can be read from 6 ft. away and describes content well.
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Title
can be read from 4 ft. away and describes the content well.
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The
title is too small and/or does not describe the content of the
poster well.
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Mechanics
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Capitalization
and punctuation are correct throughout the poster.
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There
is 1 error in capitalization or punctuation.
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There
are 2 errors in capitalization or punctuation.
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There
are more than 2 errors in capitalization or punctuation.
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Grammar
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There
are no grammatical mistakes on the poster.
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There
is 1 grammatical mistake on the poster.
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There
are 2 grammatical mistakes on the poster.
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There
are more than 2 grammatical mistakes on the poster.
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Title
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Title
can be read from 6 ft. away and is quite creative.
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Title
can be read from 6 ft. away and describes content well.
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Title
can be read from 4 ft. away and describes the content well.
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The
title is too small and/or does not describe the content of the
poster well.
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Quotation
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Student
used a relevant quotation from the novel or from a civil rights
leader to enhance the poster. Quotation was cited correctly.
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Student
used a quotation from the novel or from a civil rights leader to
enhance the poster. Quotation was cited correctly.
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Student
used a relevant quotation from the novel to enhance the poster. No
citation.
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No
quotation used
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Making
a brochure
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CATEGORY
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Advanced
Proficient
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Proficient
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Basic
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Minimal
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Writing
- Organization
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Each
section in the brochure has a clear beginning, middle, and end.
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Almost
all sections of the brochure have a clear beginning, middle and end.
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Most
sections of the brochure have a clear beginning, middle and end.
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Less
than half of the sections of the brochure have a clear beginning,
middle and end.
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Writing
- Grammar
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There
are no grammatical mistakes in the brochure.
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There
are no grammatical mistakes in the brochure after feedback from an
adult.
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There
are 1-2 grammatical mistakes in the brochure even after feedback
from an adult.
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There
are several grammatical mistakes in the brochure even after feedback
from an adult.
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Spelling
& Proofreading
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No
spelling errors remain after one person other than the typist reads
and corrects the brochure.
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No
more than 1 spelling error remains after one person other than the
typist reads and corrects the brochure.
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No
more than 3 spelling errors remain after one person other than the
typist reads and corrects the brochure.
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Several
spelling errors in the brochure.
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Writing
- Vocabulary
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The
authors correctly use several new words and define words unfamiliar
to the reader.
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The
authors correctly use a few new words and define words unfamiliar to
the reader.
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The
authors try to use some new vocabulary, but may use 1-2 words
incorrectly.
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The
authors do not incorporate new vocabulary.
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Writing
- Mechanics
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Capitalization
and punctuation are correct throughout the brochure.
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Capitalization
and punctuation are correct throughout the brochure after feedback
from an adult.
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There
are 1-2 capitalization and/or punctuation errors in the brochure
even after feedback from an adult.
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There
are several capitalization or punctuation errors in the brochure
even after feedback from an adult.
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Content
- Accuracy
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All
facts in the brochure are accurate.
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99-90%
of the facts in the brochure are accurate.
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89-80%
of the facts in the brochure are accurate.
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Fewer
than 80% of the facts in the brochure are accurate.
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Attractiveness
& Organization
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The
brochure has exceptionally attractive formatting and well-organized
information.
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The
brochure has attractive formatting and well-organized information.
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The
brochure has well-organized information.
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The
brochure's formatting and organization of material are confusing to
the reader.
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Sources
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Careful
and accurate records are kept to document the source of 95-100% of
the facts and graphics in the brochure.
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Careful
and accurate records are kept to document the source of 94-85% of
the facts and graphics in the brochure.
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Careful
and accurate records are kept to document the source of 84-75% of
the facts and graphics in the brochure.
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Sources
are not documented accurately or are not kept on many facts and
graphics.
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Graphics/Pictures
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Graphics
go well with the text and there is a good mix of text and graphics.
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Graphics
go well with the text, but there are so many that they distract from
the text.
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Graphics
go well with the text, but there are too few and the brochure seems
"text-heavy".
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Graphics
do not go with the accompanying text or appear to be randomly
chosen.
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What
I learned
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Student
clearly and insightfully includes all the important information
about the16th Street Baptist church bombing
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Student
includes all the important information about the16th Street Baptist
church bombing
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Student
includes some important information about the16th Street Baptist
church bombing
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Student
does not include important information about the16th Street Baptist
church bombing
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Making
a hyperstudio
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CATEGORY
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Advanced
Proficient
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Proficient
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Basic
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Minimal
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Sounds
-planning
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Careful
planning has gone into sounds. All sounds improve the content or
"feel" of the presentation.
|
Some
planning has gone into sounds. Most enhance the content or
"feel" of the presentation, but 1-2 seem to be added for
no real reason. None detract from the overall presentation.
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Sounds
that are chosen are appropriate for the topic, but some detract from
the overall presentation.
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Sounds
are not appropriate for the presentation.
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Originality
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Presentation
shows considerable originality and inventiveness. The content and
ideas are presented in a unique and interesting way.
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Presentation
shows some originality and inventiveness. The content and ideas are
presented in an interesting way.
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Presentation
shows an attempt at originality and inventiveness on 1-2 cards.
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Presentation
is a rehash of other people's ideas and/or graphics and shows very
little attempt at original thought.
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Text
- Font Choice & Formatting
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Font
formats (e.g., color, bold, italic) have been carefully planned to
enhance readability and content.
|
Font
formats have been carefully planned to enhance readability.
|
Font
formatting has been carefully planned to complement the content. It
may be a little hard to read.
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Font
formatting makes it very difficult to read the material.
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Content
- Accuracy
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All
content throughout the presentation is accurate. There are no
factual errors.
|
Most
of the content is accurate but there is one piece of information
that might be inaccurate.
|
The
content is generally accurate, but one piece of information is
clearly flawed or inaccurate.
|
Content
is typically confusing or contains more than one factual error.
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Content
- Accuracy
|
All
content throughout the presentation is accurate. There are no
factual errors.
|
Most
of the content is accurate but there is one piece of information
that might be inaccurate.
|
The
content is generally accurate, but one piece of information is
clearly flawed or inaccurate.
|
Content
is typically confusing or contains more than one factual error.
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Spelling
and Grammar
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Presentation
has no misspellings or grammatical errors.
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Presentation
has 1-2 misspellings, but no grammatical errors.
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Presentation
has 1-2 grammatical errors but no misspellings.
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Presentation
has more than 2 grammatical and/or spelling errors.
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Sequencing
of Information
|
Information
is organized in a clear, logical way. It is easy to anticipate the
type of material that might be on the next card.
|
Most
information is organized in a clear, logical way. One card or item
of information seems out of place.
|
Some
information is logically sequenced. An occasional card or item of
information seems out of place.
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There
is no clear plan for the organization of information.
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Use
of Graphics
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All
graphics are attractive (size and colors) and support the
theme/content of the presentation.
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A
few graphics are not attractive but all support the theme/content of
the presentation.
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All
graphics are attractive but a few do not seem to support the
theme/content of the presentation.
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Several
graphics are unattractive AND detract from the content of the
presentation.
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Effectiveness
|
Project
includes all material needed to gain a comfortable understanding of
the topic. It is a highly effective study guide.
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Project
includes most material needed to gain a comfortable understanding of
the material but is lacking one or two key elements. It is an
adequate study guide.
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Project
is missing more than two key elements. It would make an incomplete
study guide.
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Project
is lacking several key elements and has inaccuracies that make it a
poor study guide.
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Making
a timeline
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CATEGORY
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Advanced
Proficient
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Proficient
|
Basic
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Minimal
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Fonts
and Colors
|
The
use of font styles and colors is consistent and shows a logical
pattern. It helps organize the material.
|
The
use of font styles and colors is consistent and shows a logical
pattern for the most part. It helps organize the material somewhat.
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The
use of font styles and colors is consistent, but is not used
effectively to organize.
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The
use of font styles and colors is not consistent OR detracts from the
organization.
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Graphics
|
All
graphics are effective and balanced with text use.
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All
graphics are effective, but there appear to be too few or too many.
|
Some
graphics are effective and their use is balanced with text use.
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Several
graphics are not effective.
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Readability
|
The
overall appearance of the timeline is pleasing and easy to read.
|
The
overall appearance of the timeline is somewhat pleasing and easy to
read.
|
The
timeline is relatively readable.
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The
timeline is difficult to read.
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Title
|
The
timeline has a creative title that accurately describes the material
and is easy to locate.
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The
timeline has an effective title that accurately describes the
material and is easy to locate.
|
The
timeline has a title that is easy to locate.
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The
title is missing or difficult to locate.
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Dates
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An
accurate, complete date has been included for each event.
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An
accurate, complete date has been included for almost every event.
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An
accurate date has been included for almost every event.
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Dates
are inaccurate and/or missing for several events.
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Learning
of Content
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The
student can accurately describe 75% (or more) of the events on the
timeline without referring to it and can quickly determine which of
two events occurred first.
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The
student can accurately describe 50% of the events on the timeline
without referring to it and can quickly determine which of two
events occurred first.
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The
student can describe any event on the timeline if allowed to refer
to it and can determine which of two events occurred first.
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The
student cannot use the timeline effectively to describe events nor
to compare events.
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Preparation
|
The
student had notes about all the events and dates s/he wished to
include on the timeline before beginning to design the timeline.
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The
student had notes about almost all the events and dates s/he wished
to include on the timeline before beginning to design the timeline.
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The
student had notes about most (~75%) of the events and dates s/he
wished to include on the timeline before beginning to design the
timeline.
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The
student had not prepared adequate notes before beginning to design
the timeline.
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Time
Use
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Classroom
time was used to work on the project. Conversations were not
disruptive and focused on the work.
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Classroom
time was used to work on the project the majority of the time.
Conversations were not disruptive and focused on the work.
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Classroom
time was used to work on the project the majority of the time, but
conversations often were disruptive or did not focus on the work.
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Student
did not use classroom time to work on the project and/or was highly
disruptive.
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Resources
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The
timeline contained at least 8-10 events related to the topic being
studied.
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The
timeline contained at least 6-7 events related to the topic being
studied.
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The
timeline contained at least 5 events related to the topic being
studied.
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The
timeline contained fewer than 5 events.
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Making a newspaper
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CATEGORY
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Advanced
Proficient
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Proficient
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Basic
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Minimal
|
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Knowledge
Gained
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All
students in the group can accurately answer all questions related to
a) stories in the newspaper and b) technical processes used to
create the newspaper.
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All
students in the group can accurately answer most questions related
to a) stories in the newspaper and b) technical processes used to
create the newspaper.
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Most
students in the group can accurately answer most questions related
to a) stories in the newspaper and b) technical processes used to
create the newspaper.
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Several
students in the group appear to have little knowledge about the
facts and the technical processes used for the newspaper.
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Spelling
and Proofreading
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No
spelling or grammar errors remain after one or more people (in
addition to the typist) read and correct the newspaper.
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No
more than a couple of spelling or grammar errors remain after one or
more people (in addition to the typist) read and correct the
newspaper.
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No
more than 3 spelling or grammar errors remain after one or more
people (in addition to the typist) read and correct the newspaper.
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Several
spelling or grammar errors remain in the final copy of the
newspaper.
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Articles
- Purpose
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90-100%
of the articles establish a clear purpose in the lead paragraph and
demonstrate a clear understanding of the topic.
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85-89%
of the articles establish a clear purpose in the lead paragraph and
demonstrate a clear understanding of the topic.
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75-84%
of the articles establish a clear purpose in the lead paragraph and
demonstrate a clear understanding of the topic.
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Less
than 75% of the articles establish a clear purpose in the lead
paragraph and demonstrate a clear understanding of the topic.
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Articles
- Supporting Details
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The
details in the articles are clear, effective, and vivid 80-100% of
the time.
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The
details in the articles are clear and pertinent 90-100% of the time.
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The
details in the articles are clear and pertinent 75-89% of the time.
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The
details in more than 25% of the articles are neither clear nor
pertinent.
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Graphics
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Graphics
are in focus, are well cropped and are clearly related to the
articles they accompany.
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Graphics
are in focus and are clearly related to the articles they accompany.
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80-100%
of the graphics are clearly related to the articles they accompany.
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More
than 20% of the graphics are not clearly related to the articles OR
no graphics were used.
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Who,
What, When, Where & How
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All
articles adequately address the 5 W's (who, what, when, where and
how).
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90-99%
of the articles adequately address the 5 W's (who, what, when, where
and how).
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75-89%
of the articles adequately address the 5 W's (who, what, when, where
and how).
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Less
than 75% of the articles adequately address the 5 W's (who, what,
when, where, and how).
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Requirements
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All
of the required content was present.
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Almost
all the required content was present.
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At
least 75% of the required content was present.
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Less
than 75% of the required content was present.
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Articles
- Interest
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The
articles contain facts, figures, and/or word choices that make the
articles exceptionally interesting to readers.
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The
articles contain facts, figures, and/or word choices that make the
articles interesting to readers.
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The
article contains some facts or figures but is marginally interesting
to read.
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The
article does not contain facts or figures that might make it
interesting to read.
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Use
of Primary Sources
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Reading
of primary source material was thorough.
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Reading
of primary source material was fairly thorough.
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Reading
of primary source material was incomplete.
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Reading
of primary source material was not done.
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Trait Writing Model
Writing Project
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CATEGORY
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Advanced
Proficient
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Proficient
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Basic
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Minimal
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Word
Choice
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Writer
uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the
reader's mind, and the choice and placement of the words seems
accurate, natural and not forced.
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Writer
uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the
reader's mind, but occasionally the words are used inaccurately or
seem overdone.
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Writer
uses words that communicate clearly, but the writing lacks variety,
punch or flair.
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Writer
uses a limited vocabulary that does not communicate strongly or
capture the reader's interest. Jargon or clichés may be present and
detract from the meaning.
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Introduction
(Organization)
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The
introduction is inviting, states the main topic and previews the
structure of the paper.
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The
introduction clearly states the main topic and previews the
structure of the paper, but is not particularly inviting to the
reader.
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The
introduction states the main topic, but does not adequately preview
the structure of the paper nor is it particularly inviting to the
reader.
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There
is no clear introduction of the main topic or structure of the
paper.
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Sequencing
(Organization)
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Details
are placed in a logical order and the way they are presented
effectively keeps the interest of the reader.
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Details
are placed in a logical order, but the way in which they are
presented/introduced sometimes makes the writing less interesting.
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Some
details are not in a logical or expected order, and this distracts
the reader.
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Many
details are not in a logical or expected order. There is little
sense that the writing is organized.
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Transitions
(Organization)
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A
variety of thoughtful transitions are used. They clearly show how
ideas are connected.
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Transitions
clearly show how ideas are connected, but there is little variety.
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Some
transitions work well; but connections between other ideas are
fuzzy.
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The
transitions between ideas are unclear or nonexistent.
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Accuracy
of Facts (Content)
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All
supportive facts are reported accurately.
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Almost
all supportive facts are reported accurately.
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Most
supportive facts are reported accurately.
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NO
facts are reported OR most are inaccurately reported.
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Adding
Personality (Voice)
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The
writer seems to be writing from knowledge or experience. The author
has taken the ideas and made them "his own."
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The
writer seems to be drawing on knowledge or experience, but there is
some lack of ownership of the topic.
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The
writer relates some of his own knowledge or experience, but it adds
nothing to the discussion of the topic.
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The
writer has not tried to transform the information in a personal way.
The ideas and the way they are expressed seem to belong to someone
else.
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Support
for Topic (Content)
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Relevant,
telling, quality details give the reader important information that
goes beyond the obvious or predictable.
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Supporting
details and information are relevant, but one key issue or portion
of the story line is unsupported.
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Supporting
details and information are relevant, but several key issues or
portions of the story line are unsupported.
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Supporting
details and information are typically unclear or not related to the
topic.
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Focus
on Topic (Content)
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There
is one clear, well-focused topic. Main idea stands out and is
supported by detailed information.
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Main
idea is clear but the supporting information is general.
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Main
idea is somewhat clear but there is a need for more supporting
information.
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The
main idea is not clear. There is a seemingly random collection of
information.
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